126 Revelation chapter 26 first draft
26: The Lost Gospel
Daniel snapped awake again when the Humvee hit a bump in the road. Looking back over his shoulder, he saw it wasn’t so much a bump as a hole. Or a crater.
He’d been trying to sleep as they moved south, but the road conditions, lack of any meaningful shocks or suspension on the military vehicle and the heat kept waking him up. He was pretty badly jetlagged. To him it was still the middle of the night, not late morning. And he really hadn’t had a good night’s rest in a week, so that made it even worse.
And of course, there was also the fact that Jack wouldn’t stop talking.
“Hey, check this out!” Jack said from the front seat of the Humvee. He’d put a copy of Susan’s database on Jeff’s laptop, and had been digging through it while Susan did her own digging in the other Humvee.
“What’s that?” Daniel said. He noticed the soldier sitting next to him in the back seat looked far less uncomfortable than Daniel felt. How do they do that?
“Sandy, you know how we keep reporting Said Hamza dead, and then find him alive again have to retract listing him as dead?”
“I told you, call me Captain. Yeah, he’s the Al Qaeda in Iraq number two guy.”
“Turns out there’s a good reason,” Jack continued. “He’s a friggin’ immortal. We probably are killing him each time, but the bastard just won’t stay dead!”
“Shit, LT, you mean to tell me some of the bastards in Al Qaeda are these immortals of yours?”
“From what I can see, they’ve got demons placed in the IRA and Tamil Tigers, too. A lot of work in Central and South America. And yeah, they get around the Middle East.”
“They always did, according to you.”
“Wait a minute,” Daniel said, leaning forward. “You’re saying the demons have been key players in — “
“In every war, revolution, junta and terrorist organization down through the ages. They were in the Crusades, on both sides, it seems. They were in Nazi Germany. They were in Stalinist Russia. Hell, it says here Rasputin was a demon. No wonder they couldn’t kill the bastard.”
“All this time, they’ve been walking among us — “
“Stirring up trouble,” Jack said. “Anywhere you find blood and death at human hands, they’re not far off. You stumbled into the biggest secret of all time, Daniel.”
Sandarski swerved the Humvee to avoid one of the larger craters, then said, “And you really believe this, LT?”
“Captain Sandarski — “
“Thank you, sir.”
“Captain, I’ve seen one of these things with my own eyes, and met one of the angels personally. According to Susan, the angel that stood at the gates of Eden with a flaming sword. I’ve tried and failed too many times to kill a demon to think they’re anything other than real. You saw the videos I sent you.”
“A lot of the men thought those were a joke, LT. Hollywood special effects.”
“Untouched, Captain. You saw on those videos what I saw with my Mark One eyeball. They’re real. The one we fought, Batarel, was impaled, beheaded, bludgeoned, electrocuted, blown up, shot — and I mean I emptied a whole clip into the bastard, should have died from lead poisoning at the very least — and it wasn’t until Daniel there tossed him into a vat of molten steel — “
“Holy shit, that was real?”
“That’s the kind of damage it takes to kill these things, Captain. Napalm might do it, or white phosphorus. The lab rat back in DC told me they’ve got tiny machines running through their bodies, fixing damage down to the cellular level as fast as it happens. They can heal from almost anything. You have to hit them so hard there’s nothing left to rebuild, and you have to do it fast.”
“Well, shit,” Sandarski said. That about summed it up for Daniel.
“And this temple in Najaf?” Sandarski asked.
“The Mosque of Imam Ali,” Jack said. “One of the most holy Islamic sites. Shia think Noah and Adam are buried there next to Ali, the third caliph.”
“Adam. As in — “
“The book of Genesis Adam, yeah,” Jack said. “Saddam damn near destroyed the place back in ’03 — “
“Yeah, I remember hearing about that.”
“And it’s been rebuilt a few times over. But according to Uriel — “
“The angel you were talking about? Wonder if he remembers Adam.”
“According to Uriel, there’s a secret society inside all the Abrahamic churches that knows the truth about the immortals, but believes them to be what they say they are.”
“You mean,” Sandarski said, “you believe in these things, but you don’t think they’re demons?”
“Would a biblical demon have had trouble with molten steel?” Jack asked. “Should have been like going home, brimstone and all that. I never saw horns or a tail, and Uriel didn’t have any wings I could see. They’re immortal, and I don’t doubt they’re where the legends of angels and demons came from, but I don’t think they have anything to do with God.”
“Huh,” Sandarski said.
“So anyway, huh!” Jack said has they hit another hole in the road. “Can’t you keep this thing level?”
“At the speed you want, LT? Consider yourself lucky the ride’s as smooth as it is.”
“Anyway, this secret society has hidden artifacts all over the world. In the mosque, there’s supposed to be a scroll with proof of immortal existence. It’s been kept there for centuries, and kept a secret even though the place had been destroyed and rebuilt a bunch of times even before Saddam.”
“It’s a rough neighborhood, I’ll give you that,” Sandarski said. “So who do you talk to when we get there?”
“Mullah Hassan Mohammad,” Jack said.
“Hope he’s still there, LT. Not a place you want to hang out if they decide they don’t like us.”
Daniel sat back as the two men stopped talking. The desert and small villages sped past his window. He was in Iraq. On the way to a holy mosque. I don’t even have a passport, Daniel thought. He looked again at the soldier in the back seat, who still hadn’t said a word, and Sandarski. Jack trusted them, and he trusted Jack. He hoped they were good hands.
He tried to go back to sleep.
#
“Okay, LT, here we are,” Sandy said.
Jack looked out the Humvee window at the Mosque of Imam Ali. They were just west of the city of Najaf, and the sun was behind the mosque, scattering light around the golden dome that towered above the two story structure. It was a lot bigger than Jack expected, and there were dozens, maybe hundreds of people scattered around the complex.
“Let’s go,” Jack said, and opened the door.
Daniel hopped out after him, and he saw Susan and Jeff get out of the other Humvee with the rest of Sandy’s men. The locals looked curiously at the soldiers, but Jack didn’t see much hostility in their eyes. He supposed after seven years, they were used to American troops.
Not sure I’d ever feel the same were our positions reversed, Jack thought.
“You want us to go in with you?” Sandy said.
“No, just hang tight out here. I don’t want to insult them by bringing guns into a mosque.”
“Saddam did it,” Sandy said.
“And look how things turned out for him,” Jack said. “We’ll be right back. It shouldn’t take long.” He motioned to the other civilians and they walked into the mosque.
Jack walked up to the first person he saw inside who looked like they worked there and said in Arabic, “I’m looking for Mullah Hussan Mohammad.”
“I am sorry, there is no one here by that name,” the man replied.
“Please, I beg your pardon,” Jack continued in Arabic. “We have come a long way, and were told to seek a Mullah Hussan Mohammad here.”
“I am most sorry. I cannot help you.” The man walked away.
“Well,” Jack said in English, “that didn’t get us anywhere.”
“You speak Arabic?” Susan said.
“Badly,” Jack said. “I picked it up the last time I was here.”
“Useful skill to have,” Jeff said.
“Only if we can find someone who knows something. Come on.”
He walked down the central aisle of the main chamber, looking for a mullah who might know more. He saw a man in mullah’s robes talking to the man Jack had just spoke to. They both looked over at him, and then the mullah clasped the man on the shoulder and disappeared down a side corridor. The man followed him.
Jack picked up his step and tried to follow, only to watch as the door to that corridor shut just as he got there. He tried the knob and found the door locked.
“Something’s going on,” he said. “They’re ducking us.”
Jack looked around, and it looked like there were fewer worshippers than there had been before. He had to be imagining that.
“Can I be of service?” a voice behind them said in accented English.
They turned and Jack saw an old man in a threadbare suit. He didn’t look like one of the priests or their support staff. “Maybe. We’re trying to find Mullah Hussan Mohammad. We’ve come from America.”
“So has everyone else, these days,” the man said. “My name is Afif Ibn Ghalib. I’m the foreign attaché for the shrine. I help academics and other visitors who are not worshippers. And since none of you appeared to be here to pay your respects to Ali, I thought perhaps I could help.
“But I’m afraid there is no Mullah Hussan Mohammad here. I’ve been working for the shrine for decades, and I can’t remember such a man ever working here. Are you certain you’re in the right place?”
“We’re pretty sure,” Jack said.
“Why do you seek this Mullah Mohammad, if I may ask?”
Before Jack could answer, Daniel stepped in. “We were sent to retrieve a scroll. A very old artifact.”
“I see,” Ibn Ghalib said. “And you are?”
“My name is Daniel Cho. This is Jack Harris, Susan Richardson and Jeff Frankel. I was under the impression we were expected.”
“I see,” Ibn Ghalib said again. “Well, I’m not sure how I can help you. Who did you say sent you?”
Just loud enough for Ibn Ghalib and the other three to hear, Daniel said, “We were sent by the Archangel Uriel, Mullah Mohammad.”
The man nodded, and seemed to age another twenty years before Jack’s eyes. “I see,” he said again, with far more gravity. “I knew this day would come, but I prayed to Allah that I would not live to see it. Come with me.”
He turned and led them down another hallway to a stone staircase, and then proceeded down. As they followed, Jack whispered to Daniel, “How’d you know he was Mohammad?”
“While you were talking to him,” Daniel whispered back, “the other worshippers were quietly ushered out. Even though he seemed calm, his pulse rate, which I could see by his jugular, was rapid, indicating he was much more agitated than he appeared. And he only showed up after you asked for him by name. Seemed like a solid guess.”
“You must have been hell on wheels in an operating theater,” Jack said.
Daniel just looked at him. It occurred to Jack that he still didn’t know why Daniel quit being a surgeon.
“Just because I’m old doesn’t mean I’m deaf,” Mohammad said in front of them. He led them out into a narrow, low-ceilinged stone passageway, thick with dust.
“Sorry,” Daniel and Jack said in unison.
Mohammad led them into a small room, which appeared to be empty. He walked over to the stone wall and pushed in on a stone, moving it about an inch. Then he stepped over a few feet and pushed another. He pushed seven total when they heard a deep rumbling. Dust shook loose from the walls as the far wall receded as one piece, then moved aside, exposing a small alcove.
“Behold,” Mohammad said. “The Lost Gospel of the Angels.”
#
Sandy was standing guard outside with the men. He saw the usual traffic patterns, pretty much what you’d expect to see at a holy Muslim shrine. It was starting to get dark, and he knew the heat of the day would fade quickly. He was going to have a hard time keeping warm if they didn’t hurry—
Something tripped an alarm in his mind, something in his peripheral vision. He looked over and saw a group of men who didn’t seem to be all that different from any of the other traditionally dressed pilgrims to the mosque. They wore long flowing robes, and—
And if you didn’t know what to look for, you might not see the weapons and explosives they were concealing.
“Sergeant, radio Camp [whatever is closest to Najaf] and have them send reinforcements,” Sandy said.
“Sir? How many?”
Sandy did a quick calculation on what the men he saw could do if they really had as much semtex as he thought they did. “All of them.”
[In this chapter, make Jack wait outside and observe the approaching demons. Inside, give Jack’s dialogue, minus the Arabic, to Susan or Jeff. That way we avoid making Sandy a POV character. Never seeing a scene from inside his head is vital to his reveal in the third act of Crusade to be one of the Grigori. Also, have him ask Jack in the Humvee if the database lists all the immortals, and have Jack explain that there are 200 demons, part of something called the Grigori, that are listed only by their true names, but with no human identities.]

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