119 Revelation chapter 19 first draft
19: Electrocution in Philadelphia
[scene with Jack trying to convince the Philly PD that no, really, he’s chasing a terrorist, not just assaulting neighborhood dogs; cops leave Jack to his own devices]
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Daniel stood next to the power station. It was fully night, now, and they had no idea where Batarel was. He should have found them by now.
“Any sign of him,” he said into the walkie talkie.
“Nothing here,” Jeff said.
“Nothing here either,” Susan said.
Daniel was starting to think this was a dumb idea. What made them think they could make an immortal walk into a tra—
“Cho.”
He knew that voice by now and it stopped him cold. He was here. But still, Daniel couldn’t see him. He had to be just beyond the edge of the lights.
“Batarel.”
The demon didn’t reply, so Daniel couldn’t determine the location from the sound.
“He’s here!” Daniel said into the walkie talkie. As soon as he spoke, a knife flew at his head from the dark.
“Shit!” he said, dropping and rolling away. He heard Jeff and Susan running towards him just as he saw Batarel step out of the darkness. Somehow he wasn’t surprised to see that the demon was walking into a fight with them while wearing another designer suit.
He heard a bang as he was getting up, and saw a bright red hole appear in Batarel’s shirt. The demon didn’t even slow down.
“This is even more pathetic than the last attempt,” Batarel said. “I take it this is an elaborate ruse to electrocute me? Let me get that out of the way.” He walked over to one of the towers, hopped up to the lowest run, a good ten feet off the ground, and climbed until get to a live wire. Looking back down to make sure they were still watching, he reached out and grabbed the wire in his hand.
Sparks shot a hundred feet in the air and Daniel heard thundering bangs from the capacitors behind him. The lights went out, and Daniel could see that all the houselights were out in all the nearby houses.
Batarel dropped back to the ground, charred and still smoking. What was left of his hair was sticking straight out, and his suit was in tatters. But in spite of that, he was smiling.
“My turn,” he said. He snapped a leg out and caught Daniel in the midsection, knocking the wind out of him and throwing him backwards a dozen feet.
Jeff brought up a shotgun and unloaded in the demon’s chest. “Susie, get in the car!” he said. Susan was standing just off to the side, getting it all on camera.
The demon grabbed the shotgun out of Jeff’s hand and hit him across the jaw with the stock. “There’s no need for that,” Batarel said. “You’re not getting away this time.”
Daniel rushed him, and fell to the ground again as the demon easily sidestepped him. “We’re not doing this again,” Batarel said. “But I’m not about to make it quick and easy, either. Not after the trouble you’ve caused me.”
The demon turned the shotgun around and aimed it at Susan. Daniel was just rising to his feet when he heard the shot.
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Jack looked down the barrel of his pistol, cordite pungent in the night air. Instead of dropping from the ten millimeter slug in his back, Hendriks turned around, almost casually.
“A new face!” he said. “Or, wait, I know you. Didn’t I kill you last night?”
“Drop the weapon freak!”
“Or what, officer? All you’ve done is ensure you share their fate.”
Jack fired again, this time a head shot. The back of Hendriks’s skull exploded in a red mist, and Jack could clearly see through the hole as the man raised his shotgun in return.
“Oh shit,” Jack said as he dove for the ground. He actually felt the pellets pass by over his back.
“Hey, Batarel.” Cho said. Jack looked up to see Cho swinging a fucking Samurai sword with one hand at the demon, chopping off the arm holding the shotgun just below the shoulder.
“Oh,” Hendriks said. “You’re going to pay extra for that.”
Jack got back up and shouted at Cho. “Stand back!” As Cho hopped away, he emptied a clip into Hendriks’s center mass. With the man’s back turned, to him, he could actually see the hole in the back of his head sealing up. The brain expanding to refill the cranium.
What in the holy fuck is this? Jack thought. He’d seen perps on PCP or meth shake off what should have been disabling wounds. He’d seen men in Iraq crawl to safety missing limbs. But he’d never seen anyone who could do—
“Head’s up, Agent Harris!” Cho said as he swung the sword again, aiming to sever the head from the neck. This time Hendriks ducked, and the sword only caught his hair, skimming across the scalp. Hell, Jack thought, even that should have hurt enough to put him down.
From his lower stance, Hendriks lashed out with a kick that caught Cho squarely in the cast. Cho went down screaming.
The old man had gotten back up, and leveled an automatic at Hendriks. “Susie, I ain’t telling you again. Get in the damn car!” He emptied a clip in Hendriks, which knocked him back just enough for Frankel to get Cho’s arm over his shoulder. “We’re bugging out, girl! Get!”
Richardson ran past Jack. “Sorry, Agent Harris!” she said.
Jack slapped another clip into his pistol and started firing at Hendriks again, just trying to keep him off balance. He wasn’t aiming for center mass now, but trying to take out kneecaps, hit the shoulder and spin him around, anything to buy time.
Frankel and Cho limped past him. “Much obliged, sir,” Frankel said.
This is, without a doubt, Jack thought, the weirdest night I’ve ever had.
He could hear sirens in the distance, faint red and blue lights visible in the blackout. “You can’t leave me here with him!” he said. He heard Richardson fire up the Crown Vic he’d seen coming in.
“Sorry, Agent, but we don’t have much choice!” Frankel said, easing Cho into the back seat. “Sounds like help’s on the way, though!”
The door shut, Jack popped another couple rounds into Hendriks, and the Crown Vic pulled away, lights off and nearly invisible in the blackout. They were using him, and his gunfire, as a distraction to slip past the police. He had to give them credit, they were resou—
Hendriks leapt at him and Jack fired another shot as he dodged. But Hendriks wasn’t attacking him. He was just vaulting over him and trying to chase down the Crown Vic on foot. And until they shifted into third, he had a shot at it.
The sirens were much closer now, and Jack didn’t want to try to explain this. He slunk off into the night himself, going the opposite way he’d seen Hendriks run. No sense tempting fate.

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