118 Revelation chapter 18 first draft
18: Mother and Invention
“Have you seen this man?” Jack asked. He was in a diner just off Interstate 95, the fourteenth such diner he’d stopped at that afternoon. On the theory that they had gone north on 95 from DC to Baltimore, he just kept going north, sticking to cities big enough for Richardson to mask her signal if she tried to upload another video. He was stopped in south Philly and starting to think he was working a dead end. Maybe they headed west instead.
“That guy?” the hostess said.
“Yes, ma’am, the man in this picture.” Who else would I be talking about? Jack thought.
“Yeah, now that you mention it, I seen him,” she said. “He was in here with some geezer and a brunette for lunch. Took up a corner booth for two hours, thought we’d never turn that over.”
“He was here?” Great, now it was his turn to ask stupid questions. He hadn’t gotten much sleep.
“Yeah. They took off after the chick started making a scene, yelling at the geezer. Thought I’d have to separate them, but they left just after.”
“Did you see which way they went?”
“Nah, once they went outside Bert dropped a tray of orders and we had to clean stuff up.”
“Thank you,” Jack said.
“So,” she said. “Is there some kinda reward for information?”
He flashed her his ID. “Just the thanks of a grateful nation, ma’am.”
“Yeah, that and a buck fifty’ll get me a cup of coffee.”
Jack walked out the door and was about to call Dante just as his phone rang. It was Dante.
#
“Daniel! Oh my God, son, where are you?”
“I can’t tell you that, Mom. I just wanted you to know I’m okay.”
“Daniel, there were FBI men here yesterday.” Daniel imagined her standing in the stockroom of the store she and his father ran in Oakland. It was just a neighborhood grocery store, little more than a convenience store with produce, really, but it had been his home growing up. His family lived above the store and Daniel and his sisters had all spent as much time there as they had in school. That was where his parents had drilled into him the unlimited promise of America, the drive to excel and the work ethic that got him through medical school and working as an ER surgeon.
For all the good that did him.
“I know, Mom.”
“Daniel, they said you were a terrorist.” She nearly hissed the word, pronouncing it with vehemence she usually reserved for Kim Jong Il.
“I’m innocent, Mom.”
“Then why don’t you turn yourself in?”
“It’s complicated, Mom.”
“Pah!” she said. “It’s not so complicated. You did nothing wrong, you turn yourself in. Your father, he worried about you.”
Wow, Daniel thought. Her grammar didn’t start to slip unless she was really upset. His mother took great pride in becoming fluent in English, and worked very hard to speak it without much of an accent.
“I can’t tell you what’s going on,” Daniel said. “Not yet.”
“Why, Daniel? Why can’t you tell me?”
Because the FBI is almost certainly recording this conversation, Daniel thought. “I wish I could, but it’s going to have to wait until the next time I see you.”
“If you keep running, they arrest you? When do I get to see you then?”
“I’m innocent, Mom,” Daniel repeated. “But there’s more to it than that.”
Daniel heard his mother sob, and instantly, his eyes began to well up. Shit, he thought.
“Daniel, please turn yourself in, so you can come home. It wasn’t your fault, that night at the hospital. No one blames you. You don’t have to run so far.”
He couldn’t tell her. He couldn’t tell her that he was being chased by more than just the FBI. He couldn’t tell her that an immortal monster was trying to kill him. He definitely couldn’t tell his mother, a devout Christian, that he was being hunted by a demon from the Book of Enoch. So what could he do?
“I’ll be home as soon as I can,” Daniel said. “I love you, Mom.”
“I love you too, Daniel.”
He hung up.
#
“Talk to me, Dante,” Jack said.
“The tap on his parents’s phone paid off,” Dante said. “He called them.”
“Number?” Jack asked.
“Didn’t tell us anything,” Dante said. “It’s a pre-paid disposable.”
“Dammit!” Jack said. How many of those did Cho have?
“But we were able to locate it.”
“And you didn’t start with that bit of information why?”
“He’s in north Philadephia,” Dante said. “In a residential neighborhood.”
“Any known contacts in the area?”
“None, but I’m not sure how much that means. If he was staying with someone, he could have used a land line.”
“Unless he knew we had a tap on his family line.”
“He’s a smart guy, sir. He probably figured that out. I’m thinking that’s why he used a disposable.”
“So he’s not still talking to them?” Jack asked.
“No sir, it was a short call. After he hung up he turned off the phone and we lost the lock on his location. I’m sending a transcript of the call to you by email, and I’ve got the lab going over the recording to see if we can pull out any background sounds that could give away what he’s up to”
“Good,” Jack said. “Let me know if he turns on the phone again.”
“Will do, sir.”
Jack hung up the phone and got in his car. He was close, and he was right about them coming up to Philly. He could get them today, tonight at the latest.
Only, something had been nagging at him all day. What if Cho was right? Jack knew Cho had been right about some of it. He’d seen Hendriks with his own eyes. Something was going on that he didn’t understand. What was Hendriks? Why was he trying to kill Cho? Was Cho right that he, Richardson and Frankel wouldn’t be safe in federal custody? And how would Jack possibly explain what they needed to be protected from?
He shook his head. None of that mattered right now. First, he had to capture them. What happened after that was for someone else to decide.
He started the car and pulled into traffic.
#
Batarel checked his face one more time in the hotel bathroom mirror. The wound had healed, of course. It had healed before he even left Baltimore. Something still felt… off… somehow. Maybe it was just that that the annoying little speck of a human had pushed him recently, forced him to regenerate more than he had in a thousand years. Well, nearly a thousand years. That second Crusade was a bitch.
He ran his hand through ginger hair and sighed. Cho had no chance to kill him, but last night had almost been worse. To be captured, and captured with proof of his true nature sticking out of his God damn head, that was just too much to risk. It was worse than his death, because it threatened the cause. Fortunately, no one other than Cho and his compatriots survived to tell the tale, and they’d be dealt with soon enough.
They’d better be. This was dragging on too long, and he wasn’t going to be able to dodge Zagiel much longer.
He strode into the living room and looked out the wide glass doors at the cityscape of Philadelphia laid out in front of him. He was in a four star hotel, using one of his spare identities. It felt good to get out of the muck for a while, to treat himself to a little luxury. He damned well deserved it.
He walked out on the balcony, let the summer evening breeze brush past him. He couldn’t quite figure why Cho was giving him so much trouble. He’d learned some valuable lessons from the experience, true. He knew he had to get better with firearms. He hadn’t really practiced with a hand weapon since the crossbow. And he needed to get better at online tracking. He’d had absolutely no luck thus far in tracking down Richardson online, not in any way that would lead to her, and thus Cho’s, physical location. And now he’d been thwarted in Baltimore, he didn’t want to use his contacts in the Church here in Philadelphia. It would not do for him to look weak, and no one talked like priests talked.
He knew they were here. He felt it. They’d stayed in major metro areas so far, never stopping for more than supplies in small towns or rural areas. They were sticking to I-95, heading relentlessly north, like they were looking for something. He wasn’t sure what that could be, and he was half tempted to let them find it.
But no. This had to end, and it had to be tonight.
#
“Penny for your thoughts,” Susan said.
Daniel was sitting on the hood of the car, watching the sun set over west Philadelphia. The sky was a beautiful mix of orange, red and indigo above. He turned and looked at her. “People always say that,” he said. “But then you have to put your two cents in. Somebody’s making a penny.”
“Steven Wright,” Susan said. She’d heard that joke before.
“Yeah. Weird how stuff like that stays with us, even in times like this, huh?”
Susan hopped up on the hood next to him. “I’m sorry about the diner this morning. I don’t know why I snapped like that — “
“You snapped because you were exhausted and terrified. We all were. Still are, really. It’s okay, I probably over reacted.”
“You didn’t. I could have gotten us caught.”
“Well, you didn’t. And hopefully, after tonight, it won’t matter.” He reached down beside him and grabbed a pistol, one of the ones Jeff bought in Baltimore. He pulled the top part back and it jerked forward with a “chickt” sound. He started messing with something on the side of it.
“Do you know how to use one of those?” Susan asked.
“I had a friend in college who was a gun nut. He took me to the shooting range a few times. I know how to fire a pistol, but my accuracy’s nothing to write home about.” He put the pistol down on the side away from her, and then picked up the sword he’d used in D.C. “Speaking of writing, how’s that going?”
“I have a draft written about today and what we’re planning to do. And I’ve got the camera ready for tonight, all the space freed up for new footage.”
“Good,” he said, inspecting the blade of the sword. “We need this documented in as much detail as possible. If Batarel isn’t the only one of his kind, the way Jeff says, then we need to know everything we can about how to destroy them.”
“Do you really expect to use that?” she said, pointing to the sword.
“God, I hope not,” Daniel said. “It’s really not designed to be used one-handed, and I can’t hold it with my left hand [make sure the break and cast is on Daniel’s left arm]. But it was effective in slowing him down a couple nights ago — “
“Oh my God,” Susan said.
“What?” Daniel said. He put the sword down and grabbed the gun again.
“No, nothing’s wrong,” she said. “I just can’t believe that was only two nights ago. Four nights ago I was in my own bed, trying to figure out how to track you down for an interview. It seems like a lot longer.”
Daniel put the gun down and laughed. “Yeah, and less than a week ago, I was just some nobody paramedic trying to disappear. Now I’m a nobody paramedic trying not to get killed by an immortal demon. It’s been a rough week.”
Susan started laughing, and she found she couldn’t stop. Once she started snorting, Daniel broke out laughing too, and before long they were both doubled over on the hood of the car, trying to catch their breath.
Jeff walked up from behind the car, where he’d being going over their supplies in the trunk. “What’s so funny?” he asked.
This got Susan and Daniel going again in a whole new bout of laughter.
It was a nice moment. It would be quite a while until they laughed again.
#
“We’ve got him, Agent Harris.”
Jack struggled to fit the earbud in his ear so he could talk without holding the phone up to his ear as he drove. “Where?”
“Feeding the GPS coordinates to your car now. He just turned on the phone, but he hasn’t placed a call yet. He’s not moving either. It’s another residential neighborhood, not far from the other one,” Dante said.
“So they’ve set up a base of operations here, but he moved away from it to call his parents? Why would he turn it on now and stay still?”
“I don’t know, sir. Looks like you’re about three miles away.”
Jack accelerated and hoped for the best. If he was lucky, he’d catch them unawares. “Talk me in, Dante.”
Dante relayed instructions to him, which matched the little arrow on the GPS screen in his dashboard. He still wasn’t used to following those and keeping his eyes on the road at the same time. The department just got them six months ago. Finally, Dante directed him onto a residential street.
“He’s four houses up, sir, but that’s about all we can tell. It looks like he’s on the left side of the house, but that’s well within the margin for error in the GPS triangulation — “
“Got it Dante, thanks. Can you get a position off my phone?”
“How do you think I’ve been directing you, sir?”
“Right. Okay, I’m parking.”
“You’re right in front of the house. My best guess is that he’s in the back yard on the left, but again — “
“Margin of error. Right. Okay, I’m going in.”
Jack got out of the car, strapped on his bulletproof vest reading “FBI” in huge yellow letters, and then started in. “You’ve got backup vectored in on my position?” he whispered into the phone.
“Coming in silent, but yes, local PD is on the way. They’ve been briefed on the situation.”
“Who’s the homeowner?”
“Leroy Jenkins, no priors. No evidence he’s ever even heard of Cho.”
Jack saw that around the left side of the house, there was a six foot wooden fence. The gate was padlocked. “Padlock on the gate, but you say the cell phone is on the other side, right?” he hissed.
“Yes sir.”
“That’s probable cause in my book.”
He looked for something to help him climb. The next door neighbor had some steel garbage cans on the side of his house. That’ll do, Jack said. He pulled one of the cans over to the fence as quietly as he could. He stepped up on to it, then peeked into the back yard.
“Nothing there,” he told Dante.
“We’re still getting the signal,” Dante said.
“Fine, I’ll get a closer look. How far off is that backup?”
“Five minutes, maybe.”
Jack really didn’t want to risk losing them. “Going in alone. Radio silence until I say.”
He held on to the top of the fence with his left hand, and while holding his pistol in his right hand, vaulted a leg up to the top of the fence. He rolled over the top and dropped to the grass on the other side. Carefully, he stepped around the corner of the house.
Simultaneously, he saw two things. One, he saw the phone, lying alone in the middle of the yard, clearly tossed there. And two, he saw the two Rottweilers growling at him from the patio.
And of course, Jack thought, they’re not on chains. Thanks, Cho.
#
[Somehow, they lure Batarel to the power station. Yes, I’m skipping a whole scene. I can do that, because this is a rough draft. And rough drafts be slippery, precious, slippery indeed…]

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