120 Revelation chapter 20 first draft
20: Call It Off
Jack toweled off his hair, the hotel bathrobe scratchy against his skin. It wasn’t the Ritz, but it would do. He still wasn’t sure what he saw the night before. Two nights, now, really, he’d seen Hendriks do things that couldn’t have been real. Seen things right out of a Hollywood blockbuster. And yet, they happened. Right in front of him. Right.
He sat down on the edge of the bed just as the phone rang. He checked the time before he answered. It was six AM. Who was working in the Hoover building this early?
“Harris,” he said.
“Agent Harris, I have some news,” Dante said. “The lab guys have made a breakthrough on those particles in Hendriks’s blood.”
That got his attention. “Shoot.”
“Sir, have you ever heard of nanotechnology?”
“I’ve seen a couple stories on the news. Tiny little machines, right?”
“In general. Nanotech is about machines built from the individual atoms up rather than carving down. So far, all we’ve been able to do with it has been in materials science, tiny tubes or balls made of carbon atoms.”
“So the particles in Hendriks’s blood are these tubes?”
“No sir, they’re not.”
“So why did you bring it up?”
“Sir, the particles in the blood are nanites, or nanomachines, but they’re far more advanced than anything ever documented. Whoever built them, they’re not sharing, sir.”
“So, the Chinese, maybe?”
“No sir. Agent Harris, these machines are decades, maybe centuries, ahead of what our best scientists can do. I have no idea where they came from.”
“What do they do?”
“The lab Is still testing, but they seem to be involved in cellular maintenance.”
“In English, Dante.”
“Sorry, sir. They monitor for and repair damage and aging at a cellular level.”
“Meaning what, exactly?”
“Sir, these are immortality machines. They kill viruses immediately, as well as invading bacteria. They repair the effects of age on the blood cells.”
Immortality. “Dante, what would the effects of these machines look like in a person?”
He heard Dante gulp, even over the phone. “Just what we’ve seen in Richardson’s videos, sir. Wounds would heal almost instantly. The subject would never age, since the cellular damage that causes aging would be fixed as soon as it happened. A human with these infused in his blood would be almost impossible to kill.”
“Almost impossible?”
“Well, I’ve been thinking about that, sir. If this is why Hendriks can do what he does, there are ways around it.”
“Like what?”
“Overload the system, do more damage too fast for the nanites to handle. A grenade might work, something to make him explode and burn the pieces. We’re still testing for other ways. However the nanites work, we haven’t figured out yet how they communicate with each other to coördinate their efforts. If you could block that…”
“I see, Dante. Thanks for the tip.”
“There’s more, sir.”
“What?”
“The nanites don’t seem to be transferable. We dumped some of them in a control blood sample, and they didn’t activate. They only work for Hendriks. We think there might be a marker somewhere in his DNA that the nanites key on, but until we sequence it…”
“Gotcha.”
“Sir, this means Cho was telling the truth all along. That Hendriks really did walk away from that accident.”
“I know, Dante. But I still have to catch him. If for no other reason, than to protect him. Keep me informed.”
#
“Hold still, you big baby,” Susan said.
“I said I’m okay, Susie!” Jeff pulled away from her, trying to dodge the hydrogen peroxide she was using to clean the gash on his lip from the stock of the shotgun the night before. Daniel lounged in an armchair across the dingy motel room from them, waiting for the painkillers to kick in and make him not want to just cut off his left arm.
They’d gone north again after the fight with Batarel, ultimately ending up here in Newark, New Jersey. Out the motel room window he could see just a piece of the famous Manhattan skyline across the river, behind Jersey City. The sun was coming up over the Atlantic, throwing the city into silhouette. They were now in a metropolitan area containing over twenty million people, and this time they were hoping that Batarel wouldn’t be able to find them. At least, not today. They certainly weren’t looking for him.
“There!” Susan said. “Done!” Daniel saw that Jeff had a little butterfly suture holding the cut on his lip shut. Susan turned to him. “Daniel? You okay?”
“I’ll be fine, Susan.”
“Not if you take another beating like that, you won’t.” He fussed over him for a few seconds, making sure there really wasn’t anything she could do before she sat down on the other bed and fired up her laptop. She plugged the camera into the side of the laptop and started doing her thing.
“So,” Jeff said, “what’s our next step?”
“As far as I’m concerned,” Daniel said, “there isn’t one. I’m done.”
“Done?” Jeff and Susan said in unison. In stereo, where available, Daniel thought. He might need some stronger painkillers.
“Yeah,” Daniel said. “Done. We can’t beat him. We can’t kill him. It’s time to cut our losses.”
“And how do you think that’s gonna work, Danny?” Jeff said. “He still wants you dead. He’s going to keep coming.”
“In a city this big, he can try to find me. I’ve dropped everything and started over before. I can do it again. It’s like the Witness Protection Program.”
“Daniel,” Susan said. “I don’t want to start over. I make my living being visible, talking to people. I’ve spent years building a name in this business — “
“Susan, you’re a blogger. Change your name and write about cats. He’ll never find you.”
“That was mean,” Susan said.
“Don’t you people get it?” Daniel said. “He’s immortal. He’s going to kill us if we keep fighting him. He almost did kill you last night, Susan. If that FBI agent hadn’t shown up when he did, you’d be a red smear under a Philadelphia power station, and then how would you have reached your readers? Séances?”
“But he did show up, Daniel. We are still alive.”
“For now,” Daniel said. “And that’s contingent on making sure Batarel never finds us. The next time you see him, it will be very hazardous to your health. Consider that my professional medical opinion.” Yeah, definitely time for some stronger painkillers. Or just a hell of a lot more of the ones he had. He wished he still had a prescription pad.
“Daniel, I want you to think about something,” Jeff said. “Do you think Batarel’s acting alone? Do you think he’s the only one of his kind? We’ve got another day, two at the outside, to bring him down before this gets strung out too far for him to contain it.”
“What the hell are you talking about?”
“He’s a demon, Daniel.” Daniel noticed Jeff was calling him by his given name, not “Dan” or “Danny.” Probably thought that would make Daniel take him more seriously. All the while talking suicidal nonsense. That was a good try, though.
“Yeah? We know that, Jeff.”
“There are thousands of demons. Hundreds of thousands, if not millions, of their human minions. Are you going to avoid all of them, every day, for the rest of your life? Because that’s what you’re talking about.
“And even if you can, and I can, what about Susan? After all she’s done for you, are you just going to give up on her? Throw her career away?”
Daniel jumped up out of the chair. “You don’t fucking get it! The next time we see Batarel, we are dead! Do you understand dead?” He stormed out of the hotel room and slammed the door behind him.
#
[In revisions, establish before this scene that they can track Jack by GPS via his cell phone, not the car. The FBI was going to put in-dash GPS into the cars, but due to budget cuts they just got GPS-enabled phones and dashboard mounts.]
Jack was packed and just tying his shoe when his phone rang again. He picked it up and answered without looking.
“What’s up, Dante?”
“I’m very disappointed in you, Jack,” Lou said. Aw, shit…
“I’m sorry, Lou. I know it’s taking longer than — “
“Jack, you haven’t been online yet this morning, have you?”
Uh oh. “No sir, I haven’t. Last night didn’t go very well, and — let’s be frank, yesterday as a whole didn’t go very well, and I thought a good night’s sleep — “
“Richardson posted another one of her videos this morning, Jack. You’re in it. In kind of a starring role.”
Come to think of it, Richardson did have one of those little digital cameras. “Sir, I can explain — “
“My phone has been ringing off the hook this morning Jack. I finally had to tell Stacey to hold all my calls.”
You mean the calls you were making her take to begin with? You never answer your own phone, you old windbag. “I’m sure that’s an inconvenience, sir — “
“Do you know who’s been calling me, Jack?”
“I wouldn’t hazard a guess, si — “
“I’ve gotten calls from the Hill, of course, but they were already mad at you. I’ve gotten calls from all the cable networks. They’re rebroadcasting Richardson’s video now, so it’s not just the geeks on the internet who can see this. I’ve gotten calls from Director Mueller, Director of Homeland Security Janet Napolitano — “
I know who the goddamn director of DHS is, you idiot, you don’t have to say her full name…
“ — White House Media Chief Robert Gibbs, pretty much everyone but the president himself. And do you know what they all want to know?”
“Sir, I — “
“They want to know what the hell is going on, Jack. Only I can’t tell them. Because I don’t know. I don’t know what one of my most decorated agents is doing in Philadelphia terrorizing some poor civilian’s dog. I don’t know how said agent ended up on a videotape recorded by a suspected terrorist, and yet hasn’t reported an arrest of the same terrorist. I don’t know why I’m even paying you at this point!”
Jack said nothing. Frankly, anything he said would only make the situation worse.
“So here’s what we’re going to do, Jack,” Lou continued. “You are going to return to Washington immediately. We are going to mobilize a DHS task force to track down and apprehend Cho and his companions, and you are going to explain to Director Mueller why this has been fucked up so terribly.”
“Sir, I have information from Analyst Hicks — “
“Analyst Hicks,” Lou sneered. “You’re supposed to be a federal agent, Jack. The analysts support you, not the other way around.”
“But these new findings — “
“Oh, I’m well aware of Hick’s collaboration with the lab rats. I’ve had him reporting to me on the hour, trying to see just what it was you were so interested in. And frankly, Jack, it’s bullshit. All this talk about nano-whatsits and immortality, it’s all stuff for those losers who put on pointy ears and go to conventions when they’re not in their mother’s basements. It’s a mistake, and I’m sure the lab will correct their initial analysis shortly.”
“But what Hendriks did, last night — “
“Agent Harris, when did you get the impression this was a conversation? I know anyone can do Hollywood-style special effects with a laptop. I don’t believe the video any more than I believe the lab results. And frankly, Agent Harris, any more than I believe you. Now get back to Washington on the double! That’s an order!”
Lou hung up before Jack got a chance to tell him to go fuck himself. Instead, Jack just stared at the phone. Of course Lou didn’t understand. He’d been a desk jockey his whole career, a political animal. And political animals survived by maintaining the status quo.
A quote came to him from yet another internet video. The status was not quo. He knew it, but he would never be able to convince Lou. There was nothing more he could do to get the FBI involved in this.
He tossed the phone down on the bed. It would be found by housekeeping, and hopefully returned to the FBI. But it wouldn’t relay his GPS position back to headquarters. Once he walked out that door, he was on his own.
He walked out the door.
#
Daniel walked down the street away from the motel, passing gas stations, convenience stores and pawn shops. They just didn’t get it. They couldn’t fight a demon, and they had been stupid to try. Now all they’d managed to do was piss him off, and get the FBI on their collective asses.
And that’s the other thing. He’d just wanted Susan to tell his story, then get on with her life. And Jeff, he’d never even asked to help. And yet now, here he was again, with other people’s lives in his hands. Exactly what he didn’t want. Never wanted again.
They were going to die. That was almost a given. Their only hope at all was to disappear, to give up everything about their lives, to start over, stay off the radar and never, ever attract attention. Jeff may be a kook, Daniel thought, but he’s been right about the demons. So he’s probably just as right about their network of “minions.”
As he walked, Daniel studied the people around him, shuffling about their daily lives. How many of them secretly worshipped immortals? How many of them did so openly, but called them angels rather than demons. Jeff hadn’t gone into that part of the secret society, but Daniel figured if one really existed, so must the other. Were they out there? Watching him? Had he ever met an angel and just didn’t know it? After all the demons didn’t have horns or smell of brimstone. They just never died.
No, it wasn’t fair, especially to Susan. He felt like shit dragging her into this. But how was he supposed to know? How was he supposed to know that the only way for her to survive being sucked into his problem was abandoning everything she’d ever worked for and hiding like a mouse for the rest of her life? All he’d wanted was the truth about what happened at that crash on M street, and that’s supposed to be what reporters are all about, right? Finding the truth?
Daniel was a smart guy, or at least thought of himself that way. He’d breezed through college and med school. He was supposed to be able to figure out a way out of this. A way to give Jeff and Susan their lives back. A way to avoid living every day in fear for the rest of his life. But he just couldn’t see it. What did you do if someone who wants you dead also turns out to be unstoppable and unkillable?
You ran, that’s that you did. You ran like a rabbit. You ran like Daniel ran from Oakland, like he was still running.
Daniel checked his watch. It was just a quarter after nine in the morning. Screw it, he thought. It’s New Jersey. They’ve got to be serving alcohol somewhere.

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